ACT III
FADE IN:
EXT. THE TRUCK – DRIVE-BY – DAY
INT. THE TRUCK – MOVING – DAY
McCORMICK’S behind the wheel again. HARDCASTLE is in the passenger seat. PORTMAN, looking bewildered and frustrated, is in the middle.
PORTMAN





It wasn’t my name, and it’s not my signature.
McCORMICK
PORTMAN





Yeah, but it was my birthdate. Why use that?
HARDCASTLE





You ever seen your birth certificate? Applied for a





passport or anything like that?
PORTMAN





I was born in a little hospital over in Needles. My mom





moved here after she split with my dad. She never wanted





to talk about it. I was an only child.
HARDCASTLE





Think your mom has a copy of it at home?
PORTMAN







(there’s an awkward pause and then she





It happened when I was ten. You get used to being




alone. I never thought . . . you think maybe . . . ?
HARDCASTLE





Only one way to find out.
CUT TO:
EXT. THE COUNTY RECORDS BUILDING - DAY
INT. THE MAIN FILE ROOM – DAY
ROSE CARLUCCI is standing behind her desk, arms crossed. HARDCASTLE is giving it his best shot while McCORMICK and PORTMAN look on, hopefully
HARDCASTLE





It’s an easy one, Rosie. Nothin’ fancy. We need





a couple of birth certificates.
CARLUCCI





We got a whole department for that, Milt.





They even take the forms by mail.
HARDCASTLE





Yeah, but we don’t have a week to wait for them to send








(he smiles winningly but he’s not taking ‘no’ for an answer)




One’s for this young lady here, Andrea Portman, that’ll




be from San Bernadino County. Then we need to know if there’s 



another one for an Angela Pinder, same birthdate.







(he hands her a slip of paper)
Carlucci sighs. She looks at Andrea, who’s looking back, still hopeful.
McCORMICK





Come on, Rosie. This is like one of those stories at the




supermarket checkout lane: ‘Twins separated at birth.’





She just wants to know if she has a sister.
CARLUCCI
HARDCASTLE




We’re still working on that.
Carlucci acquiesces with a nod and sits down at her computer terminal. She looks at the paper Milt handed her, and starts typing on a keyboard.
PORTMAN







(trying, but not succeeding, to be patient)
Carlucci looks up briefly, then returns to what she was doing, backspacing a couple of times, then typing swiftly and jabbing the enter button. There’s the anticlimactic pause associated with dial-up speed. Then Rosie studies the results for a moment and turns the screen to face the others.
INSET: COMPUTER SCREEN
Text in orange-on-black reads: Angela Pinder. Born 9:01 am, June 12, 1965. St. Vincent’s Hospital, Mother: Ruth Pinder. Father: none listed.
ANGLE – PORTMAN
PORTMAN





My mother’s name was Ruth, but it was Ruth
HARDCASTLE
Carlucci clears the screen and types in the new data. Same pause as the digital wheels turn. She shakes her head and turns the screen again.
CARLUCCI
HARDCASTLE




Try Andrea Pinder. Same birthddate.
Carlucci does some more keyboarding. Pause.
CARLUCCI
Portman looks, frowning, baffled. She shakes her head and looks like she needs to sit down. We don’t need to see the screen to know what it says.
PORTMAN





There’s papers. Everything from when I was in school.
HARDCASTLE





Sure it is, kiddo. There’s lots of ways it
Portman looks at him despairingly.
HARDCASTLE





First off, your mom might have had a good reason





to not want your dad around. You said she never
Portman nods grudgingly.
HARDCASTLE




So your mom and dad must’ve split. Maybe they split you




two as well. Or maybe she realized she couldn’t take care of




the two of you, and left your sister with a friend or the county.
PORTMAN
McCORMICK





Identical twins stick out. If you’re trying to hide from





somebody, it’d make it a whole lot harder.
Portman is shaking her head slowly.
HARDCASTLE




She got a new name for herself, and she registered you for school the 


same way. Hell, all those folks having their kids in communes back then, the authorities were probably glad you weren’t another



Moonbeam Wholegrain Sunshine or somethin’ like that.
PORTMAN
HARDCASTLE
CARLUCCI





If she stayed in California, and if she didn’t
McCORMICK





Same name, at least until ’82.
CARLUCCI





--and if you give me some time.





I do actually work for the Records Department.
HARDCASTLE




And a fine employee you are, too. Anything you




can get for us, we’ll be grateful.
CARLUCCI
CUT TO:
EXT. A MANSION – DAY
It’s the extra-large version, with Grecian columns and a portico, the home of JASON KAYTS, a trust fund baby who’s all grown up.
INT. ELEGANT OFFICE/LIBRARY - DAY
KAYTS is ensconced behind a black walnut desk. He’s a dark-haired man with aristocratic features, the scion of wealth. Looks like J.T. HALLER is on the carpet, literally and figuratively, standing in front of the desk. He looks nervous.
HALLER





You remember that girl on the yacht, Mr. Kayts,





the one maybe three years ago, the one who
KAYTS







(coolly, nothing rattles this man, things get





The one you took care of.
HALLER





Except it looks like maybe the girl’s turned up again.
KAYTS







(still cool, and disbelieving)





After all this time, and with those currents out there?





What’s left and where did they find it—Santa Cruz?
HALLER





Not a body. Her. She showed up at Vinnie’s—
KAYTS







(beat – and then just a bit less cool, though still







not acting as if it’s his problem)





You assured me. She was dead.
HALLER




Yeah, we both thought so, right? But maybe she wasn’t.




Maybe somebody pulled her out, or she came to and




started swimming. I dunno. But Vinnie says it’s her –





and the guy she was with, he’s a judge, and he was




asking for all the papers, the stuff from the shoot.
KAYTS





Why not the police? And why now? It’s been four
HALLER





I dunno about any of that. All I know is this Hardcastle




guy—that’s the judge—he’s left the bench right around when




that girl went in the drink. Now he’s got her and he’s nosing around 


Vinnie. Hell, maybe she had some brain damage or something. Maybe he’s trying to put it all together for her.
KAYTS




If he does, the path will lead right back to us.







(beat – and then with an edge of menace)
HALLER







(then trying to sound helpful and





I got everything there is to get on Hardcastle.
KAYTS





Then you can take care of the matter?





I mean better than you did last time?
HALLER







(swallows again – hard – but then sounds





Absolutely. You don’t have to worry about a thing.
CUT TO:
EXT. GULL’S WAY – DAY
EXT. GULL’S WAY PATIO – DAY
There’s pizza on the table but nobody’s eating. PORTMAN is there but her mind is clearly elsewhere. McCORMICK is kitty-corner from her at the table, looking as if he’s trying to give her a little space – but he’s not real good at that.
PORTMAN








(noticing she’s being a lousy guest)




Sorry, it’s just a lot to digest. A sister, a twin – I dunno.







(beat – then looks at McCormick curiously)





Do you have any brothers or sisters?
McCORMICK





It’s remotely possible my father left a few scattered





around and forgot to mention them.
PORTMAN







(looks wistful, even at this less than sterling





I always wondered what it would have been like
McCORMICK
Portman looks startled.
McCORMICK





Mine hit the road when I was five.




And if you’re thinking of tracking yours down, I’d




say it’s a bad idea. Your mom may have had good




reasons for not talking about him.
PORTMAN







(gives it a moment’s thought and then nods)





Yeah, you’re probably right. I’ve never had the
McCORMICK




That’s different. And she probably doesn’t know
PORTMAN




It’s weird, though, all those years I was in the system –




after my mom died – I always wished I had somebody,



a sister maybe. Just someone who would




understand what it was like.
McCormick opens his mouth to reply but Hardcastle comes thumping down the back steps from the kitchen door. He’s been working the phone inside. He pulls up a chair and snags a piece of pizza.
HARDCASTLE





Nothing from Rosie yet about your sis, but I ran





down a little info on our other guys.
PORTMAN





But Angela wasn’t underaged when those
HARDCASTLE




Never hurts to know all the players’ jersey







(beat – pulls a piece of paper from his





First we got Vinnie D’Sousa, but he’s small potatoes.





Had a couple brushes with the law early on –





underage models – but he wiggled out and it looks





like he’s been pretty careful the past coupla years.
McCORMICK





All that does is explain why you made him
HARDCASTLE





Unctuous little creep, wasn’t he?







(shakes his head and then glances at his paper





J.T. Haller, now there’s a slightly larger fish. Got his start





peddling tout sheets, then moved up to printing them.





Must be a lousy businessman, though, ‘cause he went bust





at it – and it’s not easy to lose money betting on gamblers.
McCORMICK





So he switched horses in mid-stream?
HARDCASTLE





Yup, got a new start about six years ago. A different





kind of fillies. The question is, where’d he get the





capital? Anyway, he still seems to be solvent, but





nowadays girlie magazines are a dime a dozen, and that





office of his looks pretty slick.







(notices Portman, who’s been pensively
PORTMAN





I’m not sure. It’s been a weird day. I’ve been





sitting here wondering if it wouldn’t be better to





I’m not sure what I’d say to her, even if I could







(looks increasingly doubtful)




I don’t think we have much in common. I mean,





what kind of a girl would –
McCORMICK





One who needed a job and didn’t have a lot of
PORTMAN







(a little self-righteous)





I pay the rent waiting tables and hustling tips.
McCORMICK





We’re always only one decision away from a





And for your sister, it might’ve not even been her
PORTMAN








(backs down, looks pensive again)





Yeah, that’s the scariest part, knowing that it





How the hell did my mom choose one of us?
It’s a toughie, and it’s greeted by a moment of awkward silence until Hardcastle shifts in his seat.
HARDCASTLE




No good answer sometimes.





You should eat something.
PORTMAN








(shakes herself loose from her increasingly








gloomy reverie, glances around – it’s getting on





There’s class tomorrow and I’m way behind on my
McCORMICK
HARDCASTLE





And I’ll let you know when Rosie comes up
PORTMAN
CUT TO:
EXT. PACIFIC COAST HIGHWAY - NIGHT
We’re looking east, just outside Gull’s Way. We see the truck pulling out from the drive with McCORMICK behind the wheel. It turns onto the road, heading toward L.A. It hasn’t gone far when –
ANGLE – PULL BACK
We see another another vehicle – a nondescript, dark, paneled van – emerge from a secluded spot and head in the same direction as the truck.
CUT TO:
INT. THE TRUCK – NIGHT
McCormick is driving. PORTMAN is the passenger. Most of his attention is on the road, but he takes a long look in the driver’s side mirror.
PORTMAN
McCORMICK





It’s spending too much time with the





Pretty soon you start seeing desperados behind
Portman smiles but turns halfway around and peers through the rear window. After a moment she turns back.
PORTMAN





It’s just headlights to me. And it’s not like there’s a





lot of turn-offs around here.
McCORMICK







(he gives her a quick glance and a





Thank you. I needed to hear the calm
CUT TO:
EXT. THE PACIFIC COAST HIGHWAY – NIGHT
The truck flashes by. There is a moment of silent darkness and then the nondescript van goes by as well.
CUT TO:
EXT. L.A. RESIDENTIAL STREET – NIGHT
We see a block of run-down, low rent apartment buildings – a student ghetto. There’s no foot traffic. The truck pulls up to the curb. McCORMICK exits the driver’s side. PORTMAN gets out onto the sidewalk. She meets him at the front of the truck, obviously intending to cross the street to her destination. She’s a half-step ahead of McCormick.
SERIES OF SHOTS – VERY FAST SEQUENCE
A glaring set of headlights suddenly looming behind Portman and McCormick. He lunges forward.
Close-up chaos: bodies falling. We hear shouts.
The view obscured by the headlights blurring to a brief white-out with a roar of engine noise.
Then – all is dark silence. There are two shapes huddled on the street, just in front of the parked truck. One has his head up already, staring down the street intently. It’s McCormick. He starts to stand, helping Portman up as well.
McCORMICK
She nods, but looks shaken. Her cheek is smudged with dirt. Her things are scattered in the street. McCormick stoops again to gather them up. He picks up a something – a pair of glasses. They’re mangled.
PORTMAN







(finally finding her voice)
McCORMICK





That was the van I saw by the estate.
PORTMAN





You got a look at it here?
McCORMICK





A Ford Econoliner, midnight blue, maybe black, an ’82 –





plus or minus a year, California plates, L-K –




and then it was too far off.







(beat – then holds up the mangled glasses)





Maybe I need a pair of these.
Hold on that, then,
CUT TO:
EXT. GULL’S WAY – NIGHT
The truck is parked in front of the main house. The driver’s side is visible and the mirror is sheered off, dangling by one screw.
INT. THE DEN – NIGHT
HARDCASTLE is sitting at his desk, tapping a pencil.
ANGLE – PULL BACK INTO FOYER.
McCORMICK descends the stairs from the second floor.
ANGLE – FROM THE DEN TOWARD THE FOYER.
McCORMICK is in the doorway. He leans casually against the jamb, arms crossed. He got scuffed up, too, and apparently hasn’t had time to do anything about it.
ANGLE – HARDCASTLE
HARDCASTLE








(concern mixed with just a hint of





You got her all tucked in?
ANGLE – DOORWAY
McCORMICK





Yeah, clean towels in the guest bathroom and




everything. Wouldn’t want less than a four-star rating




for the Gull’s Way safe house, huh?







(uncrosses arms and takes the two steps down







into the den, slumping into the nearest chair –





Anything back on the license plate?
HARDCASTLE





Not yet. Jeez, give ‘em a couple minutes, at least.





Anyway, in the words of Frank Harper, ‘two letters





is kinda partial, even for a partial.’
McCORMICK




I gave ya the make and model.
HARDCASTLE





And a paneled van isn’t exactly a Lamborghini.
The phone rings. Both men reach for it, but Hardcastle is closer.
HARDCASTLE







(he listens, reaches for a pen and pulls a







pad toward him, and starts scribbling something –





Yeah, I’m figuring that’s it.





No, no proof, just a good hunch.







(another beat or two, then indignant reaction)





Of course I’ll tell ya if I get anything solid. I always
Hardcastle hangs up, looking thoughtful. McCormick looks at him impatiently. The judge jogs out of his cogitating after a moment.
HARDCASTLE
McCORMICK
HARDCASTLE





We got a midnight blue ’82 Econoliner with a plate





LKZ-582 registered to SoCal Systems, Inc.
McCORMICK
HARDCASTLE





That’s a privately held company owned by a guy
McCormick still looks blank.
HARDCASTLE





Rosie called back after you two left. I had her dig




a little deeper into the Moonglow set-up. Turns out




the building it’s in is owned by SoCal.
McCORMICK
HARDCASTLE





That building and the printing facilities where





Moonglow’s publications are generated. Kayts





is more than J.T.Haller’s silent partner, I’d say





Haller is a wholly-owned subsidiary of Kayts.
There’s a moment of silence as McCormick appears to be thinking this through, then suddenly reaches the obvious.
McCORMICK





You’ve heard of this Kayts guy before?
HARDCASTLE








(picks up pencil and taps it a couple of times on





Not a nice man, but it’s all rumors, no facts.
McCORMICK





What kind of “not nice” are we talking about?
HARDCASTLE





He’s got an ex-wife who went missing off Santa





Barbara back in the ‘70s. A few parts turned up,





months later, but nothing that would prove what





shape she was in before she hit the water.





The rumor was that she wanted out of the





marriage, that she told her friends Kayts was





There’s something else Rosie told me.
McCORMICK
HARDCASTLE





That’s a cold trail. No address, nothing in the DMV.
McCORMICK
HARDCASTLE
McCORMICK




She changed her name. Lots of girls in that line of
HARDCASTLE




And I called Gus back, asked him if he remembered




any other spreads with Angela in them.





I didn’t want to ask him while Andrea was there.
McCormick nods.
HARDCASTLE





He says there’s nothing else. So she didn’t stay
McCORMICK
HARDCASTLE




I think she’s dead. But Rosie can’t find any




record of that, either. No marriage license, no





death certificate, nothin’.
McCormick glances up toward the ceiling.
HARDCASTLE





Doesn’t look like there’s gonna be one of those





happy endings like in the Reader’s Digest. But





I’d at least like to find out what happened to her.




And I think maybe I know why they’re trying to
Hold on that, and,
CUT TO BLACK
END OF ACT III